Self Correction of The Value of Originality Essay

I scored a four out of six on my writing about the question of originality, I was only given twenty five minutes to write a two page essay. I didn't finish and it was very challenging for me to stay attentive to my essay. If I could go back I would most likely try to get more in depth with my answer to that question of "Can people ever be truly Original?" I felt that there weren't many errors with my grammar and I was pretty organized in outlining my thoughts and bringing them to life on the paper. If I could go back and change anything it would be the amount of time I was given.